Sir,
I would like to draw your attention towards the mushroom growth of institutes in _______ (Place). This is quite apparent in ____________ (Place), where every Tom, Dick, Harry is starting an education centre without any proper infrastructure and proper facilities. The same can be said about the schools. This has led to a crass commercialization of education, where a student is fleeced in the name of education. Since most of the students belong to ____________ (Place) and ____________ (Place), they fall an easy victim to these brokers of education. Moreover with problems of getting admission in ____________ (University Name) due to low percentage, money of these institutes also doubles up as P.T. (Private Tuition) college having incompetent faculties. Through the column of your newspaper, I would like to suggest to the Education Minister of ____________ (Place) to take stern action against these institutes and safeguard the interests of the student community.
Yours Truly,
(Your Name)